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St. Thomas High School -- Part IV

I'm just home from my last of four visits this winter to St. Thomas High School in Pointe-Claire. The girls in today's pic are Emelie (in grey) and Olivia (wearing a hoodie). I took their picture following a writing exercise I did in which I asked students to write about an object that was meaningful to them. Credit for this writing exercise goes to the girls' English teacher Miss Murphy. I had been telling the class the story of the monkey man charm I wear on a necklace around my neck, and Miss Murphy suggested I get the students to write about their own meaningful objects.

Must say the exercise worked! Olivia wrote about the ring she received as a gift from her best friend Clover. (I just love the name Clover -- don't you think I should use it in a book?) In the mini-paragraph Olivia wrote about the ring, she said, "I always touch it when I'm nervous and when I miss her." Emelie wrote about the silver cross she received as a gift from her grandmother in Greece. I got tingles when Emelie told me this about her grandmother: "she has memory loss so I'm not sure if she remembers me or not."

Like I was telling the classes today -- it isn't only people who have stories. Objects have stories to do. And if you ask me, it's our work, as human beings, to collect the stories that feel important to us and to pass them on.

I had lunch again in the library so that I could work with senior students who have the writing bug. One of the highlights of my day was reading dialogue by a student named Will. Will gave me his permission to quote it here. You need to know that in Will's story, a character named Mel has been shot and her friend Maksim is tending to her. "Tell me a secret," Mel says. "I love you," Maksim answers. To which Mel replies, "I said a secret." I don't know about you, but reading that gave me SHIVERS -- which is my body's signal that I am hearing or reading a really (excuse the adverb!) good story.

I hope to be back at St. Thomas this spring -- that's because I want to drop by some lunch time to celebrate the publication of Leggings Revolt, a book I could not have written without the terrific input of some students whom I worked with last year at the school -- and hey, one of those students was Will.

Thanks to the teachers -- Mr. Cloney, Miss Murphy, Mr. Canuel and Mr. Katz -- for sharing your classes with me, thanks to librarian Mrs. Pye for the invite, to librarian Mrs. Di Maulo for looking after me today, and to the students for being wonderful and working hard.

Oh Happy Day!
St. Thomas High School -- Part III
 

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Guest - Abbey K. on Monday, 25 January 2016 22:00

Thanks Monique Polak for sharing your DEATH TO ADVERBS advice with me today at lunch, it will stay drilled into my brain for as long as I continue to write.

Thanks Monique Polak for sharing your DEATH TO ADVERBS advice with me today at lunch, it will stay drilled into my brain for as long as I continue to write.
Guest - Olivia Dillon on Monday, 25 January 2016 22:50

Thank you so much Ms. Polak for coming and sharing your stories with us!
Much appreciation from Clover and I for putting our story in your blog, it means a lot to know you enjoyed my writing about the ring!
I hope you visit our school again this year,
-Olivia

Thank you so much Ms. Polak for coming and sharing your stories with us! Much appreciation from Clover and I for putting our story in your blog, it means a lot to know you enjoyed my writing about the ring! I hope you visit our school again this year, -Olivia
Guest - Monique on Tuesday, 26 January 2016 14:21

Good morning, Abbey and Olivia, Thanks for your messages. Always makes me happy to get PROOF that kids are reading my blog. Great to work with you guys yesterday. Abbey, i hope that you will bury many adverbs in the adverb cemetery. Olivia, my students at Marianopolis agree that Clover would make a great name for a character in a story. Bye for now to both of you!

Good morning, Abbey and Olivia, Thanks for your messages. Always makes me happy to get PROOF that kids are reading my blog. Great to work with you guys yesterday. Abbey, i hope that you will bury many adverbs in the adverb cemetery. Olivia, my students at Marianopolis agree that Clover would make a great name for a character in a story. Bye for now to both of you!
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